tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post1135910898515554432..comments2023-10-25T03:32:06.815-07:00Comments on brian's blog: Diary of a Writer: Sooner is BetterBrian Yanskyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-40263825844145408432010-06-05T14:19:53.475-07:002010-06-05T14:19:53.475-07:00Great post and I'm glad to be reminded of this...Great post and I'm glad to be reminded of this - it's something I've witnessed a lot in new writing - the author holding off what makes their story interesting for a big reveal some point later on - oft times though the reader will never get that far. Like the idea that getting it out early and up-front also pushes the story deeper - this is an interesting idea and I'm sure very true. I'm going to explore that idea further. A useful and thought-provoking post. Thank you.James Killickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14513775874350745555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-45608094972283763602010-05-12T05:09:15.624-07:002010-05-12T05:09:15.624-07:00Solvang,
I agree that you want to avoid informati...Solvang,<br /><br />I agree that you want to avoid information dump. And other writers are going to talk about plot and say you should release just a trickle of information in order to increase tension. Sometimes this might be right. But I know that on first drafts my withholding sometimes leads me the wrong way. For instance, some traumatic event in your main character's childhood is important. You think you can build tension by withholding it until the end so you end up devoting pages and pages to this, but maybe telling it near the beginning forces you to develop your story in other ways that deepen character etc... AGAIN, I'm not saying this is always true. Every story is different. It's just another idea to have in mind when you're making choices about character. A lot of writers talk about plot in sort of a conventional mystery-story kind of way; as I said maybe that's right sometimes but it's led me down the wrong path in some stories. Ultimately, you want to do what serves your particular story, but it's always good to have other perspectives and options.Brian Yanskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-75410332777161563422010-05-11T18:10:21.684-07:002010-05-11T18:10:21.684-07:00Interesting...I always thought you were supposed t...Interesting...I always thought you were supposed to do the opposite so that you don't end up with an info dump.Sherrie Petersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11670339498152684137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-64559621011293944182010-05-10T05:04:56.490-07:002010-05-10T05:04:56.490-07:00Thanks Anna and Andrea. I'll check out your bl...Thanks Anna and Andrea. I'll check out your blog Anna. That's interesting, Andrea. So you focus on something and you spend a lot of time in the manuscript building it up and then it doesn't live up to the hype, so then you have to go back and figure out what to cut. Good point--another reason maybe to put it in sooner in the first draft and wait for revision to try to see what's really important.Brian Yanskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-17247241460851145882010-05-10T04:52:39.492-07:002010-05-10T04:52:39.492-07:00Great advice, Brian. I'm finding with my lates...Great advice, Brian. I'm finding with my latest WIP that when I reveal the info instead of holding it back, the story gets much more exciting. Otherwise there's this build up to something that can turn out to be not as good as all the hype.Andrea Mackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15250681746122381149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-43158626905361258232010-05-09T16:43:51.577-07:002010-05-09T16:43:51.577-07:00This really made me rethink the opening chapter of...This really made me rethink the opening chapter of the revision I'm working on right now. I was going to hold off and reveal some information later on in the story, but instead I've decided to dive in and put the info in right away. In fact, I think I'm going to blog about this tomorrow. Thanks for the advice!Anna Staniszewskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09316883819771607655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-64085409019149316172010-05-09T06:07:45.996-07:002010-05-09T06:07:45.996-07:00Thanks Elisabeth and Deb.Thanks Elisabeth and Deb.Brian Yanskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-1182891708311348492010-05-08T16:39:02.076-07:002010-05-08T16:39:02.076-07:00I hadn't thought of holding off in these terms...I hadn't thought of holding off in these terms. A great point! Thanks.Deb Salisbury, Magic Seeker and Mantua-Makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01513482264195697450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-31581883312589576842010-05-08T14:09:54.638-07:002010-05-08T14:09:54.638-07:00What an amazingly good point.What an amazingly good point.Elisabeth Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08962421339750272755noreply@blogger.com