tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post6453459547682410747..comments2023-10-25T03:32:06.815-07:00Comments on brian's blog: Diary of a Writer: major/minor charactersBrian Yanskyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-63202431183121722312012-06-08T07:24:05.758-07:002012-06-08T07:24:05.758-07:00Thanks for the comment, Dawn. Living inside of it ...Thanks for the comment, Dawn. Living inside of it is a good way of putting it. So important to the way language makes the reader experience what's happening.Brian Yanskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-33170384337776979942012-06-08T06:57:15.987-07:002012-06-08T06:57:15.987-07:00I agree one-hundred percent. An editor critiqued o...I agree one-hundred percent. An editor critiqued one of my early manuscripts and said two secondary characters were more fleshed out than my main character. Looking back at the manuscripts months later, I could see it. My main character had taken on an observational role, watching the story unfold instead of living inside of it.D.E. Malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256696009575732721noreply@blogger.com