tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post9152881053030660641..comments2023-10-25T03:32:06.815-07:00Comments on brian's blog: Diary of a Writer: DescriptionBrian Yanskyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-65070588081048960972010-08-25T19:33:30.709-07:002010-08-25T19:33:30.709-07:00Me, too. I guess we're lucky we get a lot of c...Me, too. I guess we're lucky we get a lot of chances in revision.Brian Yanskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338795130182877245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967308592064240861.post-40348659457503526482010-08-25T06:09:21.563-07:002010-08-25T06:09:21.563-07:00I really struggle with this. Not so much at the w...I really struggle with this. Not so much at the word level, but just noticing when I do it. I think I must get so fixated on describing everything going on, I forget to stay in my character's head.Anne M Leonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04547591113801578453noreply@blogger.com