The
connections between characters and plot situation and setting and their
relationship to internal and external conflict is what drives a novel forward. I
struggle with this all the time. I think this simple way (Use THEREFORE, BUT
and not AND THEN) of looking at the relationship between what happens in a
story is helpful.
Check
out this very short video (about two minutes) by the creators of South Park—their
# 1 Rule.
They
say that what you’re doing is trying to link what happens in a story by either
a “THERFORE” or a “BUT”; what you should avoid is the “AND THEN” because this
will just lead to a sequence of unrelated events etc. I think this is a simple
way to remember one of those larger guiding principles of propelling your story
forward.
THIS
HAPPENS Therefore THIS HAPPENS
But
THIS
HAPPENS so (therefore) THIS HAPPENS
For
example
Boy
steals a car/Boy gets caught by police/Boy calls parents to come and get him
out/ BUT parents won’t because they decide it will teach him a
lesson/therefore-when he’s in jail he gets beat up so badly he gets put in the
hospital/ therefore…. And on it and on.
Also giving
away another ARC of Utopia, Iowa, at Goodreads—I’m down to one.
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